3.2 Ace Technique F2 (Move from general information to specific information)

Read the following two versions of text, and select which one you find easier to understand.

Version A

In a mathematical modeling study, U.S. researchers concluded that even a 5% reduction in vaccination coverage would triple measles cases, with significant health economic costs. Measles outbreaks are not uncommon in Europe and in the United States, and vaccine hesitancy or avoidance has been identified as a major cause.

Version B

Measles outbreaks are not uncommon in Europe and in the United States, and vaccine hesitancy or avoidance has been identified as a major cause. In a mathematical modeling study, U.S. researchers concluded that even a 5% reduction in vaccination coverage would triple measles cases, with significant health economic costs.

Hviid A et al Annals of Internal Medicine 2019 Measles, Mumps, Rubella Vaccination and Autism: A Nationwide Cohort Study

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