3.4 Triumph over Technique F4 (Link to preceding text within the first 9 words of a sentence)

Read the following texts and consider which one you find easier to understand.

Version A

The number of deaths directly attributed to smoking has fallen in most countries since the 1990’s. However, the number of smoking-related deaths is still on an upward trajectory in most low-to-middle income countries.

Version B

The number of deaths directly attributed to smoking has fallen in most countries since the 1990’s. However, it must be pointed out that the number of smoking-related deaths is still on an upward trajectory in most low-to-middle income countries.

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